Tegan
Condet
Humanities
101
Ms.
Waldenberger
2
October 2012
We’re All Doomed!
The article I found comes from the
textbook What Matters in America: Reading
and Writing About Contemporary Culture that I have for my English 103 class
this semester. The article is called
“Yahoo Says Americans Work Too Much”. The article was originally posted on WebProNews on 6 April 2007. In tis article, Jason Lee Miller says that
according to a Yahoo survey, Americans are working too much. Miller provides evidence to support this
thesis statement with quotes from Yahoo marketing officials and statistics from
the Yahoo surveys. One piece of evidence
he uses is a direct quote from vice president of marketing for Yahoo HotJobs
Susan Vobejda: “’With 67 percent of respondents admitting to having used a
wireless device to connect with work while on vacation, signs indicate that the
American workforce may be facing a burnout’” (Miller 276). He also states “Vobejda says all that
connectivity has changed the physical parameters of the workplace, and has
extended the workday” (Miler 276).
Miller provides the argument that “An American in the 21st
Century has to work 25 years to get the same number of paid vacation days that
are mandatory minimums in Europe” (Miller 276).
While the direct quotes from the vice president of Yahoo HotJobs are a
reliable source, with these random statistics about European vacation days the
author provides no credentials. However,
when reading the article, I found myself becoming amazed that we get so little
vacation time compared to Europeans that I didn’t quite stop to think about
where the author may have been getting his information. Maybe his sources are credible, but in simply
reading his article the audience has no proof.
Another form of evidence he uses is Yahoo survey results. Most of us can accept that Yahoo is a
credible source of information, and agree that a lot of what we read in Yahoo
news is information we believe to be true.
The results of the Yahoo HotJobs surveys are as follows: “The majority
(61 percent) agree that wireless devices make them feel like they have more
freedom; Sixty-five percent say wireless devices allow them to work remotely
and have a more flexible schedule; Almost half (48 percent) report that
wireless devices allow them to spend more time with family and friends; and An
overwhelming 70 percent agrees that they are more productive thanks to a
wireless device” (Miller 277).
I think the author of this article
did a good job of providing credible evidence for his thesis, and I also found
the article quite interesting. It made
me consider how attached I am to my cell phone and how often I am working when I’m
not even at work.
Work Cited
Miller,
Jason Lee. “Yahoo Says Americans Work Too Much.” WebProNews 6 April 2007. Web. Rpt. In What Maters in America: Reading and Writing About Contemporary
Culture Ed. Gary Goshgarian. 3rd ed. Boston: Pearson, 2012. 276-
277. Print.
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